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FEDOROV SERGEY
Moscow, 121059, B.Dorogomilovskaya, 14, 2/4 • 8(926) 3904039 • e-mail: fedorovser@yandex.ru
EDUCATION
BAUMAN UNIVERSITY (Moscow State Technical University), Moscow July 2001 – July 2007
Qualification of Engineer/Manager. Specialization in Production and Operations Management.
 The only person recommended continuing research during post-graduate course out of 22. Thesis on the use of information technologies in management. Mathematical model creation on the base of processes optimization. New methodology that has never been used in Russia before.
 Entrance competition (11 applicants for seat)
 Since the third year to the sixth top 5% in Class out of 134
 Best accountant in Class out of 22
LYCEUM SPECIALISIED IN PREPARING STUDENTS FOR MSTU, Moscow May 1999 – June 2001
One of the two best lyceums of Moscow
 Entrance competition (8 applicants for seat)
 Strong quantitative skills
 Combined studying and entrepreneurship. Small videotapes shop owner. Achieved profits growth from 0-30$ per day to 70-200$ per day.
EXPERIENCE
INDUSOFT, Moscow 2002 – present
Project engineer, Information Systems Department 2006-2007
 Team member on information system project for the TNK-BP company. Created dispatch subsystem as a part of manufacturing information system for Ryazan refinery.(30 business trips, 170 days, 11,5 hours per day)
 Team member on the Gazprom-sponsored project to develop single data storage and representation system for the Russian gas supply industry.
Presales manager, Business Development Department 2004-2006
 Negotiated with production management of aluminium plants forming SUAL Company. Arranged tender participation for Irkutsk aluminium plant manufacturing execution system project.
 Organized and took part in presentation for senior managers of TVEL nuclear fuel producing corporation.
 Made sales presentations for Moscow and Nizhnekamsk tire plants, Kamensk-Uralsky Non-ferrous metal plant and others.
 Kept up business correspondence, wrote proposals and made sales calls to potential and current customers.
 Played instrumental role in relationships with potential customers from aluminium, chemical and tire industies.
Technical specialist, Information Systems Department 2002-2004
 Analysis of CRM systems market and presenting the result to Indusoft management
 Plant information system return on investment and cost reduction paper
 Programming and developing in BASIC for different oil and gas projects
SELECTED RECENT ACCOMPLISHMENTS
 Motivated 110 plant workers to input data into information system.
 Developed a method of material consumption reducing for refining process.
 Analyzed project management system of Indusoft company. Wrote suggestions list and consulted on their deployment.
 Private consulting experience. Advised small tourist company on information technologies issues.
ADDITIONAL INFORMATION
Language skills: Proficient in reading, writing and speaking English (IELTS certificate)
Computer skills: Languages: C/C++, BASIC, Pascal, SQL, HTML. Software: Microsoft Office, Matlab, Visio, BP Win and industrial automation software. Released dispatch system maintenance program completely self written.
Sport: Award-winner as a member of lyceum basketball team. University wrestling champion.
Interests include basketball, free ride snowboarding, downhill bicycling, classical and jazz music. Organized discotheques during lyceum years. Reading in English. Jeffrey J. Fox “How to become CEO”, Machiavelli “The prince”, “The Art of War” Sun-Tzu.

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